There are two colors I like it.
First, my favorite color is yellow.
Because, yellow color is bright and clear.
Second, my favorite color is sky blue.
When I see the sky blue, I feel at ease. and I think that color is feel soft.
Today, I will talk about my favorite color. There are two colors that I like; the first one is yellow, I like it because it is bright and clear and the second one is sky blue. When I see the color sky blue, I feel at ease and I think it feels soft.
Hello, Min!
You did great in writing about your favorite color. You didn't just write them, but you also gave and explanation why you like them and what you feel about those colors which is really a good point in writing. You should let the readers feel the emotion of what you are writing. On the other hand, there are some corrections I made for your writing. There are sentences that you can just put together in one sentence. You should also arrange the words in your sentences. Keep on improving your writing skills!
Kath :)
