"Okay, we really need to hurry now Lisa! In five hours will be your birthday and if we don't arrive to the venue on that time, we will get stuck here forever!" They rushed to the 2nd dimension to say "thank you" quickly to Rosie then rushed back to 1st dimension. They finished their mission and got home safe. "Thank you Lana for making my dream come true!" "No problem! Now, do you want to eat dinner?" "Yesssss! I am straving!" The sisters lived happily ever after an came to visit Lisa and Rosie very often. They even had the chance to know the other BLACKPINK members. They were really happy upon seeing the news saying BLACKPINK Lisa has made a new record on billboard. Everyone had their dream come true and that was the most important thing for them.
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Jin06
2020.08.03
“Okay, we really need to rush now Lisa! In 5 hours it’s ur birthday and if we don’t get back by that time we will be stuck here forever!” They rushed to the 2nd dimension to say a quick thank you to Rosie and then rushed to 1st dimension. They got home safe and finished their mission. “Thank you Lana for making my dream come true!” “No problem, now do you want to eat dinner?!” “Yesssss I am starving!” The sisters lived happily ever after and went to visit Lisa and Rosie often, they even got to know the other BLACKPINK members. They were really happy when they saw a news that said BLACKPINK Lisa made a new record on billboard. Everyone had their dream come true and that was the most important thing for them.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 5회 30분 8주
교재
side by side 1 (Junior course)
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제목
튜터
작성일
1936
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My diary
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[5번째 영작 첨삭]
Think about a time when you were alone.
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1934
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My diary
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2021.04.12
1931
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[18번째 영작 첨삭]
About hamburgers and sandwiches
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2021.04.12
1930
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[10번째 영작 첨삭]
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1929
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My school.
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[5번째 영작 첨삭]
My clothes
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2021.04.10
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My favorite songs.
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2021.04.10
1926
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[17번째 영작 첨삭]
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[18번째 영작 첨삭]
My favorite toys
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2021.04.09
1924
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[17번째 영작 첨삭]
Should kids like you have an allowance
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2021.04.08
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[11번째 영작 첨삭]
My diary
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2021.04.08
1922
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[94번째 영작 첨삭]
my diary
Melissa
2021.04.08
1921
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[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Where I live. . .
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2021.04.08
1920
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[2번째 영작 첨삭]
My day
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2021.04.07
1919
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[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Precious moments
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2021.04.07
1918
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[16번째 영작 첨삭]
why we should exercise
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2021.04.06
1917
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[15번째 영작 첨삭]
why we should exercise
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