"Okay, we really need to hurry now Lisa! In five hours will be your birthday and if we don't arrive to the venue on that time, we will get stuck here forever!" They rushed to the 2nd dimension to say "thank you" quickly to Rosie then rushed back to 1st dimension. They finished their mission and got home safe. "Thank you Lana for making my dream come true!" "No problem! Now, do you want to eat dinner?" "Yesssss! I am straving!" The sisters lived happily ever after an came to visit Lisa and Rosie very often. They even had the chance to know the other BLACKPINK members. They were really happy upon seeing the news saying BLACKPINK Lisa has made a new record on billboard. Everyone had their dream come true and that was the most important thing for them.
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“Okay, we really need to rush now Lisa! In 5 hours it’s ur birthday and if we don’t get back by that time we will be stuck here forever!” They rushed to the 2nd dimension to say a quick thank you to Rosie and then rushed to 1st dimension. They got home safe and finished their mission. “Thank you Lana for making my dream come true!” “No problem, now do you want to eat dinner?!” “Yesssss I am starving!” The sisters lived happily ever after and went to visit Lisa and Rosie often, they even got to know the other BLACKPINK members. They were really happy when they saw a news that said BLACKPINK Lisa made a new record on billboard. Everyone had their dream come true and that was the most important thing for them.
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