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The next day, Lisa went to YG entertainment to pretend on BLACKPINK Lisa’s work about her comeback. Meanwhile Lana and REAL BLACKPINK Lisa went to the second dimension to bring Lisa’s pretty face back. Lisa worked hard on her dance practice and she enjoyed practicing. Lana and BLACKPINK Lisa went to the magic shop and called Rosie for help. Rosie came to Lana and helped Lisa get a new pretty face. When Lana and Lisa was about to go back to the Earth, Rosie told Lana to come over. “Lana, you and Lisa need to go back to the Arth in 2 days. Or else, you and Lisa will get stuck on the Earth and you won’t be able to go back to Arth again.” Rosie told Lana seriously. Lana replied, “I know. I will come back here as fast as I can. See you soon.” And Lana and Lisa left Rosie and came back to the Earth.

When Lana and Lisa came back from the 2nd dimension, they rushed to YG entertainment to exchange Lisa and BLACKPINK’s Lisa. “Fast Lisa! We have to go back to our dimension or else we will be stuck in here forever!” “Thank you so much for helping me, Lana and Lisa. I will do my best on my come back stage! Now... I think its time for us to say goodbye. Thank you and I hope I see you guys again! Bye and thank you so much again!” After that, Lisa rushed into the entertainment to practice her come back stage.

The next day, Lisa went to YG entertainment to pretend about her BLACKPINK Lisa's comeback. Meanwhile, Lana and REAL BLACKPINK Lisa went to the 2nd dimension to bring Lisa's pretty face back. Lisa worked hard on dancing. Lana and BLACKPINK Lisa went to the magic shop and called Rosie for help. Rosie came to help Lisa get a better appearance. When Lana and Lisa were about to go back to earth, Rosie whispered to Lana, "Lana, you and Lisa need to be on earth in two days otherwise, you both will get stuck forever and your chance of returning to earth will be impossible." She was serious when saying this. Then Lana replied, "I know. I will come back here as fast as I can. See you soon!" And so Lana and Lisa left. 

When Lana and Lisa came back from 2nd dimension, they rushed to YG entertainment to replace BLACKPINK's Lisa. "Fast Lisa! We have to go back to our dimension right away or else we will be stuck here forever!" "Thank you so much for helping me, Lana and Lisa. I will do my best on my comeback! Now, I think it is time for us to say goodbye to each other. Thank you and I hope to see you guys again! Goodbye and thank you so much again!" After that, Lisa rushed into the entertainment in preparation for her comeback stage. 


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