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When we got to the 2nd dimension, they met Lana’s friend and quickly got Lisa’s dream come true. They chatted for a bit, but Lisa and Lana were so amazed when they heard that there is a 3rd Dimension! Rosie told them how amazing it is, then Rosie led them into the 3rd dimension but Lana and Lisa wasn’t ready for what comes next...

When Lana was about to leave the 2nd dimension, Rosie told Lana that if she and her sister, Lisa, wanted to keep their pretty face even in 1st dimension, they need to help a person that needs help in 3rd dimension.




It was June 25, 2020 in the 3rd dimension. They landed in Seoul, Korea. Everywhere they kept seeing signs with “new comeback”, “billboard records”, and “BLACKPINK comeback stage tomorrow!”. Lisa and Lana were very confused and wanted to know more about them. After researching just for a few minutes about them.... Lana started suspecting something.... “Lisa... there is a member named Lisa like you...” “Well I mean there are many people named Lisa in this world” Lisa said “No, no, no, I mean like you guys look exactly alike...” Lana explained “that’s not possible though...” Lisa was surprised when her sister Lana showed her the picture of BLACKPINK’s Lisa’s face. They actually looked exactly alike!

When we arrived to the 2nd dimension, they met Lana’s friend and quickly made Lisa’s dream come true. They chatted for a little time. Both Lana and Lisa were amazed when they heard about the 3rd dimension. Rosie told them how amazing there is. She would like to lead them to 3rd dimension but Lana and Lisa were obviously unprepared for whatever that lays ahead.

When Lana was about to leave 2nd dimension, Rosie told her that if she ever would like to maintain her youth and pretty face, she and her sister Lisa must help a person who is in need from the 3rd dimension.

It was June 25, 2020 in the 3rd dimension. They landed in Seoul, South Korea. Everywhere they go, they kept seeing posters with “new comeback”, “billboard records” and “BLACKPINK comeback stage tomorrow”. Lisa and Lana were very confused and wanted to know more about it. After doing some research, Lana came up with a suspicion – “Lisa, there is a member of BLACKPINK whose name is like yours.” “Well I mean there are many people named Lisa in this world” Lisa said “No, no, no I mean like you guys look very identical!” Lana exclaimed, “That’s not possible!” “Lisa was very surprised when her sister Lana showed her photos of BLACKPINK’s Lisa. They indeed looked identical!


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