Lisa is an 18 year old girl that hates her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but to her surprise, one day, for no reason at all, she eventually became very pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how it happened, Lana always explains to her that she went to another dimension to fulfil her dream. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks had passed Lana can see the sadness in Lisa’s eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life. “ “Fine but promise me that nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa’s birthday and they needed to go back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back anymore. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me to my room. Actually there is a secret portal to the 2nd dimension there. I go there a lot. I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is the one who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it at first.”
영작교정
완료
Jin01
2020.08.03
Lisa is a s 18 year old girl that doesn’t like her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but, one day, somehow she became super pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how she became pretty, Lana will always say she went to another dimension. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks passing, Lana can see the depression in Lisa eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life.“ “Fine but promise nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa birthday and they needed to get back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me, my room actually has a secret connection to the 2nd dimension. I go there a lot, I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is The Who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it first.”
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 5회 30분 8주
교재
side by side 1 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
6236
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
My Favorite Foods
South
2024.08.05
6235
완료
[150번째 영작 첨삭]
Watch soccer match
Frans
2024.08.04
6234
완료
[149번째 영작 첨삭]
Go to english camp
Frans
2024.08.04
6233
완료
[148번째 영작 첨삭]
Playing with friend
Frans
2024.08.04
6232
완료
[147번째 영작 첨삭]
Riding bike with friend and dad
Frans
2024.08.04
6231
완료
[46번째 영작 첨삭]
The origamy
Rainbow
2024.08.03
6230
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
Birthday party
Janine
2024.08.03
6229
완료
[129번째 영작 첨삭]
Foreign visitors.
Bel
2024.08.02
6228
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
It's okay
South
2024.08.02
6227
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
My best friend
Gresha
2024.08.02
6226
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Friday Aug.2 2024 Jason
Pia
2024.08.02
6225
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Friday Aug.2 2024 Jason
Pia
2024.08.02
6224
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
tremporlen
Sydelle
2024.08.02
6223
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Suggestions
Norriel
2024.08.02
6222
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Suggestions
Norriel
2024.08.02
6221
완료
[27번째 영작 첨삭]
Thank you for your correction
Mary
2024.08.02
6220
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
studying english is
Gwen
2024.08.01
6219
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
My ldvely family
Gresha
2024.08.01
6218
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
My lovely family
Gresha
2024.08.01
6217
완료
[26번째 영작 첨삭]
7/31-2
Mary
2024.08.01