Lisa is an 18 year old girl that hates her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but to her surprise, one day, for no reason at all, she eventually became very pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how it happened, Lana always explains to her that she went to another dimension to fulfil her dream. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks had passed Lana can see the sadness in Lisa’s eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life. “ “Fine but promise me that nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa’s birthday and they needed to go back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back anymore. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me to my room. Actually there is a secret portal to the 2nd dimension there. I go there a lot. I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is the one who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it at first.”
영작교정
완료
Jin01
2020.08.03
Lisa is a s 18 year old girl that doesn’t like her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but, one day, somehow she became super pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how she became pretty, Lana will always say she went to another dimension. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks passing, Lana can see the depression in Lisa eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life.“ “Fine but promise nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa birthday and they needed to get back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me, my room actually has a secret connection to the 2nd dimension. I go there a lot, I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is The Who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it first.”
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 5회 30분 8주
교재
side by side 1 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
456
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
question3,4
-
2017.01.01
455
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
english interview
-
2016.12.27
454
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
lucky day
-
2016.12.26
453
접수
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
good thing and bad thing.
-
2016.12.21
452
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
I went to bed early last night.
-
2016.12.20
451
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
self introduce.
Maribel
2016.12.06
450
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Going to a second-hand bookshop
-
2016.12.05
449
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Paraphrase
Maribel
2016.12.02
448
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Getting a graphic design certificate
-
2016.11.29
447
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
when I was in the military
Maribel
2016.11.29
446
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
About President Rodrigo Duterte
-
2016.11.27
445
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Hi
-
2016.11.25
444
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
[Going to an one-day class]
-
2016.11.24
443
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Attending a book club
-
2016.11.22
442
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
janet~
-
2016.11.22
441
접수
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Always Thank you !
-
2016.11.17
440
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
[Sending a Chocolate to my cousin for cheering.]
-
2016.11.16
439
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Hi Charm
Charm
2016.11.15
438
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
eBay
-
2016.11.06
437
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
question
-
2016.11.03