영작교정
목록
완료

Jin01

Lisa is a s 18 year old girl that doesn’t like her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but, one day, somehow she became super pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how she became pretty, Lana will always say she went to another dimension. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks passing, Lana can see the depression in Lisa eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life.“ “Fine but promise nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa birthday and they needed to get back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me, my room actually has a secret connection to the 2nd dimension. I go there a lot, I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is The Who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it first.”

Lisa is an 18 year old girl that hates her appearance. She has an older sister named Lana. Lana also did not like her appearance but to her surprise, one day, for no reason at all, she eventually became very pretty. Whenever Lisa asked her sister how it happened, Lana always explains to her that she went to another dimension to fulfil her dream. Of course, Lisa did not believe that. Days and weeks had passed Lana can see the sadness in Lisa’s eyes. Lana needed to do something... “You need to believe Lisa, this could change your life. “ “Fine but promise me that nothing bad will happen?” “Of course, trust me”. It was 2 weeks before Lisa’s birthday and they needed to go back to their dimension or they will NEVER be able to come back anymore. “So how are we going to get to the 2nd Dimension?” “Follow me to my room. Actually there is a secret portal to the 2nd dimension there. I go there a lot. I even made some friends there. One of them is my best friend Rosie. She is the one who helped make my dream come true.” Lana said while clearing up the way to the door that led to the 2nd dimension. “Oh, and just a small warning, the world is magical, so you might not be used to it at first.”


수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 5회 30분 8주
교재
side by side 1 (Junior course)
번호
제목
작성자
튜터
작성일
4979
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭] Company Introduction-1
Eunice Kim
-
2023.08.12
4978
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭] I have a headache!!
Emily
Johnna
2023.08.11
4977
완료
[127번째 영작 첨삭] Football
-
Berry
2023.08.10
4976
완료
[18번째 영작 첨삭] 김온유
sopia
Pia
2023.08.10
4975
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭] entry
Oliver
-
2023.08.10
4974
완료
[59번째 영작 첨삭] French fries
joshua
Berry
2023.08.10
4973
완료
[58번째 영작 첨삭] I ate French fried and ketchup
aiden
Berry
2023.08.10
4972
완료
[51번째 영작 첨삭] 2023.8.10
Rose
Amarah
2023.08.10
4971
완료
[28번째 영작 첨삭] Frozen2
Yun
Melissa
2023.08.10
4970
완료
[27번째 영작 첨삭] Frozen
Yun
Melissa
2023.08.10
4969
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭] Good morning~
sopia
Pia
2023.08.10
4968
완료
[27번째 영작 첨삭] broken laptop.
Young mi
-
2023.08.09
4967
완료
[41번째 영작 첨삭] Team work
Rachel
-
2023.08.09
4966
완료
[26번째 영작 첨삭] global society
Yun
Melissa
2023.08.09
4965
완료
[50번째 영작 첨삭] 2023. 8.9 How have you been?
Rose
Amarah
2023.08.09
4964
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭] ㅊㅍㅊㅍ
-
-
2023.08.09
4963
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭] Computer class
Oliver
-
2023.08.08
4962
완료
[34번째 영작 첨삭] At the library
Christina
Mary Grace
2023.08.08
4961
완료
[57번째 영작 첨삭] I ate hamburger.
aiden
Berry
2023.08.08
4960
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭] Horseback riding
Foster
Camille
2023.08.08

초대한 친구가 수업을 등록하면
무료 수업 1회를 드려요!

무료 수업 1회
초대한 친구가 회원 가입 및 수강권 결제 후 수업을 등록하면
두 사람 모두 무료 수업 1회 수강권을 받아요!
Step 01. 조이영어로 친구를 초대해 보세요!
https://joy05.co.kr
Step 02. 인증하기
초대한 친구가 수업 등록을 완료하면, 고객센터로 수업을 등록한 친구의 '아이디' 또는 '이름 + 휴대폰 번호 뒷자리'를 남겨주세요!
*자녀 혹은 학부모 이름으로 가입하신 경우, 실제 회원가입하신 수강생 이름으로 적어주세요!
Ex. 친구 아이디: joy5205 / 친구 이름: 김조이, 9876
Step 03. 혜택받기
고객센터를 통해 인증하신 내용이 확인되면, 혜택을 적용해드립니다!

Zoom 화상수업 가이드

1. Zoom 설치하기
아래 링크에 접속하여 Zoom 프로그램을 설치합니다.
2. 수강실 입장하기
1) 조이영어 홈페이지 로그인 후 강의실에서 [수강실 입장] 버튼을 클릭해주세요.
2) 버튼을 누르고 Zoom 프로그램 열기 허용 → 컴퓨터 오디오로 참가를 누르면 튜터와 연결됩니다.
3. Zoom 이용에 다른 문의사항이 있으신가요?
조이영어 학습매니저에게 연락주시면 수업에 관련된 문의사항을 친절히 상담해드리겠습니다.
  • 카카오톡 상담 채널 : @조이영어
  • 조이영어 고객센터 : 1899-8695 (운영시간 : 월~금 9:00~17:30)

이용약관

개인정보취급방침