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Living alone.

Recently, I often think about a life living alone. Even I already got married and I have a thought that I have to live with my husband but anyway life is just like living alone. When I was young, I never thought about living alone in the world. However, I saw my grandparents' death and this was the first time to see my parents' crying a lot. After I saw the death of people, I changed my mind. Although most people have their family, relatives, and friends, life is living alone because people can't live forever young and they are eventually dead.

Recently, I often think about a life living alone. Even I already got married and I have a thought that I have to live with my husband but anyway life is just like living alone.
>>Recently, I often think about a life living alone, even though I am already married and know that I have to live with my husband.

When I was young, I never thought about living alone in the world.
>>When I was young, I never thought about living alone in this world.

However, I saw my grandparents' death and this was the first time to see my parents' crying a lot. 
>>However, I saw my grandparents' death and it was the first time to see my parents cry a lot. 

After I saw the death of people, I changed my mind. 
>>After witnessing that, I changed my mind. 

Although most people have their family, relatives, and friends, life is living alone because people can't live forever young and they are eventually dead.
>>Although most people have their family, relatives, and friends, they will still end up living alone because people can't live forever and will eventually die.

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