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Damage prevention. I’d like to emphasize that this last section is very important to us.
1. Shopping on the internet, you have to use reliable shopping mall. you can check malls in the Fair Trade Commission that you can trust.
2. You have to read information about products carefully. Check the price, quality and especially contract. you must read them in detail from A to Z.
3. Use a credit cared as much as you can. using a credit card is easier to solve problems.
4. You have to check the product with delivery man whether there’s something wrong or not. Therefore, you can certainly complain to the company when u get wrong or damaged products.
well, this brings me to the end of my presentation. I hope to remember these tips everywhere and always you use e-commerce.

Damage prevention. I’d like to emphasize that this last section is very important to us.
1. Shopping on the internet, you have to use reliable shopping mall. you can check malls in the Fair Trade Commission that you can trust.
2. You have to read information about products carefully. Check the price, quality and especially contract. you must read them in detail from A to Z.
3. Use a credit cared as much as you can. using a credit card is easier to solve problems.
4. You have to check the product with delivery man whether there’s something wrong or not. Therefore, you can certainly complain to the company when u get wrong or damaged products.
well, this brings me to the end of my presentation. I hope to remember these tips everywhere and always you use e-commerce.

CORRECTIONS:

Damage Prevention

 I’d like to emphasize that this last section is very important for us.
These are the following tips to prevent the problems.
1. Shopping through online, you have to use reliable online shops. You can check the shop in the Fair Trade Commission if it can be trusted.
2. You have to read the information’s about the items carefully. You also have to check the price, quality and especially the contract. You must read and understand them properly.
3. Use a credit card as much as you possible. Using a credit card is easier to solve the problems.
4. You have to check the item with the delivery man if there’s something wrong or not. Therefore, you can certainly complain to the company when you had wrong or damaged items.
Well, this brings me to the end of my presentation. I hope that you would remember these tips whenever you would use e-commerce.

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