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When I hear the covid-19 I thought is not serious, I didn’t wear mask, didn’t use sanitizer. After a week I didnot know and feel why it’s being issue. After few more days I finally know how serious it is, it appear everyday in news, everyone is wearing mask. I worry about mask and meeting people. Our school start doing online learning I don’t know zoom and seesaw well. WiFi is also not good very angry about China and Chinese because they block things from another country and some of Chinese ate bats and other many animals, I cannot understand why they eat those there is many more safe and clean food and meats. I check the number of people who infected to corona virus in that time.


Plane was free, so we Go to Korea. I was in the Hotel near our family’s house in Korea we stay there for few days. After my grand father come to take us to my uncle’s house, my uncle stay in my grandparents house. Uncle’s house in small because he live alone, it was very stressful to live in small place with 2person. I ate many macaroons it’s only thing I liked. And finally I go to grandparents’s house I spend lot’s of time with my grandmother and grandfather, we go cook, draw, listen to music, shopping and try to buy mask togather.

When I heard about covid-19, I thought it was not that serious. I didn’t wear mask, neither use sanitizer. A week has passed, I still did not know why it seemed a big issue. After few more days, I finally realized how serious it actually was. It appeared almost every day in the news. Everyone was seen wearing facemasks. I worried about not using a facemask and still meeting people. Our school initiated an online learning platform for the sake of students' education. I am not that familiar with zoom and seesaw well. WiFi wasn't also that stable. I was very upset with China and Chinese themselves because they blocked and prohibited a lot of things from other countries. In addition, some Chinese were reported eating bats and other wild animals. I don't understand why they eat those. I personally think that there are many more food much safer and cleaner than these wild ones. I recently checked the number of people who got infected by corona virus during that time and I feel upset about it. 


Airplane was free, so we went to South Korea. I stayed in a hotel near our family’s house in Korea for a few days. After my grand father came to bring us to my uncle’s house, my uncle stayed in my grandparents house too. Uncle’s house is small because he lives alone. It was very stressful to live in small place with 2 people living there. I ate many macaroons since it’s the only thing I liked. And finally, I went to my grandparents’ house and spent lots of time with them. We cooked, did drawing, listened to music, went shopping and bought facemasks together. 


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