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Now in America, people use phone, buy in market, live house with cement, learn easily by video, TV, all things are new things. Most people is working in company, It’s more divided to many parts than natives live. Also woman have more things what can they do than before.


Native’s culture is also very different when they sing the song and dance it’s very different from now. They use lesser instruments and most songs don’t have letters. In dance they are more like animals dance and they wear cloths with feathers and from animals. I think they have lesser things to entertain and have to do lot’s of things to live but they really enjoyed than now. Today people wants something to be happy but we need to enjoy not like I cannot enjoy.


In conclusion, native’s life and now Americans’s life is different almost different country but I think all the countries are like that. I believe world will develop much more than now like difference between native’s and now. We will have some problems but I think people will be used to it like people used to now 2000s.

Now in America, people use mobile phones almost pretty always. They can afford to buy anything in the market, they live in concerete houses and learn easily through videos, TV programs,. All things appear to be always new. Most people are working in a company. Many things have been divided to many aspects than that of natives' lives alone. Also, women have evolved and can do things than what they can before.


Native’s culture is also very different when they sing a song and dance. It’s far more different compared to the present generation. They use lesser instruments and most songs don’t have letters. In dancing, they present more like animals dance and they usually wear clothes from animals' skin and fur. I think they have lesser things to entertain before and just focused on doing lots of things to live but they really enjoyed their lives than of today's. Today people wants something to be happy but we need to enjoy not like I cannot enjoy.


In conclusion, native’s life and now Americans’s life is different almost different country but I think all the countries are like that. I believe world will develop much more than now like difference between native’s and now. We will have some problems but I think people will be used to it like people used to now 2000s.


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