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1. Who is the busiest in your family?

My father is the busiest in my family. He has to work hard and helps my mother to do the housework. I think he's not enough to sleep.

2. Do you have enough time to do what you want?
I told you that I'm taking off from school and academy. That's why I have enough time to do everything!

3. How do you spend your free time?
I'm looking for videos in English on YOUTUBE. Because I want to improve my English listening skill.

4. If your boss asked you to work overtime, would you agree?
I don't want to work overtime, but I think I have to work late. If I don't agree with the boss, I could be fired.

5. Do you usually come home late or early?
I usually come home early. My mother wants to do that. But when I see my friends, I sometimes come home late.

6. Who do you think are busier, kids or adults?
I think the answer is adults. Kids usually spend time to play or do their homework. But adults have to work hard, do their housework, and study many things.

7. Which do you think is more important, making money or spending time with your family or friends?
I think making money is more important. If we don't have enough money, we can't have a good time with our family or friends.

8. What is a typical example of how you waste time?
I think when I don't do anything, I waste time.
I think what we do everything is worth.

9. Who do you think are busier these days, men or women?
Women. All people have to work these days, but women do their housework and take care of their children more than men.

1. Who is the busiest in your family?

My father is the busiest in my family. He has to work hard and helps my mother to do the housework. I think he's not enough to sleep.

2. Do you have enough time to do what you want?
I told you that I'm taking off from school and academy. That's why I have enough time to do everything!

3. How do you spend your free time?
I'm looking for videos in English on YOUTUBE. Because I want to improve my English listening skill.

4. If your boss asked you to work overtime, would you agree?
I don't want to work overtime, but I think I have to work late. If I don't agree with the boss, I could be fired.

5. Do you usually come home late or early?
I usually come home early. My mother wants to do that. But when I see my friends, I sometimes come home late.

6. Who do you think are busier, kids or adults?
I think the answer is adults. Kids usually spend time to play or do their homework. But adults have to work hard, do their housework, and study many things.

7. Which do you think is more important, making money or spending time with your family or friends?
I think making money is more important. If we don't have enough money, we can't have a good time with our family or friends.

8. What is a typical example of how you waste time?
I think when I don't do anything, I waste time.
I think what we do everything is worth.

9. Who do you think are busier these days, men or women?
Women. All people have to work these days, but women do their housework and take care of their children more than men.

 

***1. Who is the busiest in your family?


My father is the busiest in my family. He has to work hard and helps my mother with the housework. I don't think he's tired enough to sleep.

2. Do you have enough time to do what you want?
I told you that I was taking off from school and the academy. That's why I have enough time to do everything!

3. How do you spend your free time?
I'm looking for videos in English on YouTube. Because I want to improve my English listening skills.

4. If your boss asked you to work overtime, would you agree?
I don't want to work overtime, but I think I have to work late. If I don't agree with the boss, I could be fired.

5. Do you usually come home late or early?
I usually come home early. My mother wants to do that. But when I see my friends, I sometimes come home late.

6. Who do you think is busier, kids or adults?
I think the answer is adults. Kids usually spend time playing or doing their homework. But adults have to work hard, do their housework, and study many things.

7. Which do you think is more important, making money or spending time with your family or friends?
I think making money is more important. If we don't have enough money, we can't have a good time with our family or friends.

8. What is a typical example of how you waste time?
I think when I don't do anything, I waste time.
I believe that everything we do is worthwhile.

9. Who do you think is busier these days, men or women?
Women.  All people have to work these days, but women do their housework and take care of their children more than men.


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