Compared to the past, my situation is changed a lot.
>>Compared to the past, my situation has changed a lot.
First, I moved to the Netherlands to live a better life.
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I don't know living in the Netherlands is better than Korea but I could have inner peace in here.
>>I don't know if living in the Netherlands is better than Korea, but I found inner peace here.
Besides, I quit my job to move to a foreign country.
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It was obvious that I didn't want to keep working this job.
>>It is obvious that I didn't want to keep my job.
However, I have to do my best to hunt another job in the Netherlands now.
>>However, I have to do my best to hunt for another job in the Netherlands now.
It will be harder than Korea I guess.
>>It will be harder than in Korea I guess.
Last, I started to do more things by myself.
>>Lastly, I started doing things by myself.
When I was in Korea, my family did so many works instead of me.
>>When I was in Korea, my family did all the housework instead of me.
For example, I used to get food from my mother so I didn't have to cook.
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Sometimes, I miss that time but I know that I should learn all of the things for my future cause life is living alone.
>>Sometimes I miss that time, but I know that I should learn all of this for my future because I'm already living independently.
I try to adjust these changes in my life.
>>I'm still trying to adjust to these changes in my life.
