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Yesterday night was hard to sleep well. Because I think that I have been waiting for the admission from the university which I applied. If I get an admission from the university, I'm gonna book a flight ticket to go to Korea. I miss my family, friends, and Korean food. I check my email over 5times in a day cause If the university sends me a permission to register the school. I tried to make me calm down and stable but it didn't work yet. If I go to Korea, I have to take part in self-quarantine for 2weeks. After this, I can see my family and friends but this period is too long for me cause I don't have enough time to enjoy in Korea. I wish that I can get an admission as soon as possible.

Yesterday night was hard to sleep well.
>>I couldn't sleep well last night.

Because I think that I have been waiting for the admission from the university which I applied.
>>I think it was because I'm looking forward to the admission from the university I applied to.

If I get an admission from the university, I'm gonna book a flight ticket to go to Korea.
>>I will book a flight to Korea once I get it.

I miss my family, friends, and Korean food.
>> no error

I check my email over 5times in a day cause If the university sends me a permission to register the school.
>>I check my e-mail over 5 times a day to check if the university has already sent me a permission to register for school.

I tried to make me calm down and stable but it didn't work yet.
>>I've been trying to calm myself but it doesn't work.

If I go to Korea, I have to take part in self-quarantine for 2weeks.
>>If I go to Korea, I'll have to self-quarantine for 2 weeks.

After this, I can see my family and friends but this period is too long for me cause I don't have enough time to enjoy in Korea.
>>After that, I can already see my family and friends. However, it's too long for me because I don't have enough time to enjoy in Korea.

I wish that I can get an admission as soon as possible.
>> no error

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