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Today the new sofa and curtain blind will come to my home.
The Netherlands furniture price is much higher than Korea. I think Europe's furniture price is more high even the material comes from China but maybe distance is more longer than between Korea and China.
Another difference is tax system. Here is Netherlands we can't get tax refund for buying and consuming.
Only thing can be refund from mortgage. but Korea there are tax refund system when we spend the amount of money and cash, but here there is no tax refund such as spending money and cash.
Especially human labor is really expensive to compare with Korea. All the jobs and work and installation things are expensive. here house price is also high, but interesting is they are living in house, there are not many the apartments. in Korea there are lots of apartments and we prefer to live in apartment. I think Korea population is much higher than Netherlands but the land is limited in what peoples are accommodated. that's why apartment culture is developed.

Today the new sofa and curtain blinds will come to my home.
The Netherlands furniture price is much higher than in Korea. I think Europe's furniture price is higher even when the material comes from China-but it may be because of distance.
Another difference is tax the system. Here in the Netherlands we can't get tax refunds for buying and consuming.
The only thing where we can get a refund is from mortgage. In Korea there is a tax refund system when we spend, but there is no tax refund here when spending money.
Labor is especially expensive here compared to with Korea. All the jobs and services are expensive. House prices are also high, but it's interesting that they are living in houses and not apartments. In Korea there are lots of apartments and we prefer to live in them. I think Korea's population is much higher than in the Netherlands but the land is limited so less people are accommodated-that's why apartment culture is developed.


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