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Microsoft co-founder who discovered the biggest warship in World War II

It is news about billionaire and warship.

According to Microsoft co-founder, Paul Alan, during World War II at the end of search operation for several years, Japanese's warship's wreck which had been disappeared in Philippines coast, is discovered.

This boat which is called 'Musasi' is very powerful warship in the world, once.

“The fierce battles broke out.”

In 1944 Retean battle got US's attack and shelling. Over one thousands of crews are lost their life.
Alan posted twitter about the contents which he found out warship had been sinked during World War II in 1994.


Alan who went aboard his own ultra luxury yacht "octopus" and his team found out this boat
(Musasi) under water over 1,000 meters.

Unmanned submarine took shoot film that shows this boat was there in shattered condition at the bottom of the sea, peacefully.

" This is Musasi's head of boat. Here is a huge chrysanthemum pattern symbolized Japanese imperial family's a royal seal.
"
Alan said that the unique pattern, boat's anchor, revolution machine gun squad, plane launcher fighter plane, valve gear's look proves that this boat seems warship's ruins.

History scholars agree that this boat seems Musasi. But So as to be convinced(More needed to confirm) we need to additional photos.

It is news about billionaire and warship.

According to Microsoft co-founder, Paul Alan, during World War II at the end of search operation for several years, Japanese's warship's wreck which had been disappeared in Philippines coast, is discovered.

This boat which is called 'Musasi' was a very powerful warship in the world, once.


“The fierce battles broke out.”

In 1944 Retean battle got US's attack and shelling. Over one thousands of crews lost their lives.

Alan posted twitter about the contents which he found out warship had been sank during World War II in 1994.



Alan who went aboard on his own ultra luxury yacht "octopus" and his team found out this boat
(Musasi) under water over 1,000 meters.

Unmanned submarine took shoot film that shows this boat was there in shattered condition at the bottom of the sea, peacefully.

“This is Musasi's head boat. Here is a huge chrysanthemum pattern symbolized Japanese imperial family's a royal seal."


Alan said that the unique pattern, boat's anchor, revolution machine gun squad, plane launcher fighter plane and valve gear's look proves that this boat seems warship's ruins.

History scholars agree that this boat seems Musasi. But So has to be convinced (More needed to confirm) we need additional photos.


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