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I met neighbothood yesterday. since we moved new house we met first time to talk a lot. their name is kilsten and Marco. maybe spell for name could be different from real but, I just heard that because I am not familiar still for foreign names. Anyhow since we moved the new house around one month we have cleaned inside a lot kind of painting and bought the furnitures and summarizing the stuff. from yesterday we start to manage the front garden and back garden. we just started to cut off the trees and plants during a hour. interesting thing is we met around 4 family during one hour managing the front garden. earlier time we met some neighbors but just said hello and it was not talking too much.
because we meet just in the road kind of. but, yesterday we met several families and it was happy to see the neighbors and talked. during talking I have realized that in front of my house men was working Korean business long time ago and the city name is Asan where my parents living currently, what a small world!. so sometimes its good to work outside and walkaround to see and talk with neighbors in the Netherlands. It's really not familiar culture in Korea. usually we are living in a apartment in Korea and there were not much interconnection between neighbors.

I met my neighbors yesterday. We talked a lot since it was our first time meeting them after moving to this house. Their names are Kilsten and Marco-the spelling of their names could be different, but I just heard that and I am still not familiar with foreign names. Anyhow since we have moved to the new house for around one month, we have cleaned inside. We have bought a lot of paintings and furniture. Since yesterday we started to manage the front and back garden. We started to cut off the trees and plants for an hour. The interesting thing is we met around 4 families in one hour while managing the front garden. We met some neighbors before but we just said hello and we did not talk too much because we just met in the road. But yesterday, we met several families and we were happy to see the neighbors and talked. While talking, I realized that the men in front of my house had a Korean business a long time ago and the city name is Asan where my parents live-what a small world!. So sometimes it's good to work outside and walk around to see and talk with neighbors in the Netherlands. It's not a familiar culture in Korea. Koreans usually live in apartments and there is not much interaction between neighbors.


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