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Have you ever worry about volcano damage? You don’t have to worry if you are not live place where scientist didn’t measure. It is not necessary to pay money for emergency plan if you are not live in plate boundary. For example MT.st Helen ash traveled distance of 20km away. Scientist can measure it. When you are live in where the MT. St ash doesn’t go then you don’t have to worry and prepare for that. This is important because If you are not live in scientist didn’t measure, I don’t want to spend money for it.

In today science and technology is enough to measure where the volcano happen or not . Scientist can measure volcanoes to find out where is safe or not safe.
For example, some tools volcanologists use to is tilt meter. This mean scientist know where the damage go. This reason is important because when people know how far can damage go the pen some where need to prepare.

Are you live in ring of Fire? No then you don’t have to prepare for that. Volcano can’t possibly happen every where, scientist can measure range of volcano damage.
When you are live in far away from volcanoes, you don’t that can be waste. Don’t you think waste is bad and you can use that money for another so, you don’t have to prepare for volcano.

Have you ever worry about volcano damage?

- correct

 

You don’t have to worry if you are not live place where scientist didn’t measure.

- You don't have to worry if you don't live in a place that the scientists include in the list of affected areas.  

 

It is not necessary to pay money for emergency plan if you are not live in plate boundary.

- It is not necessary to pay money for emergency plans if you don't live in plate boundary areas.

 

For example MT.st Helen ash traveled distance of 20km away.

- For example, Mount St. Helens ashe traveled a distance of 20 kilometers.   

 

Scientist can measure it.

- The scientists could measure it.

 

When you are live in where the MT. St ash doesn’t go then you don’t have to worry and prepare for that.

- If you live in the areas where the ash of Mount St. Helen didn't reach then you don't have to worry and prepare for that. 

 

This is important because If you are not live in scientist didn’t measure, I don’t want to spend money for it.
- This is important because I don't want to spend money for it.

  

In today science and technology is enough to measure where the volcano happen or not . Scientist can measure volcanoes to find out where is safe or not safe.

- Nowadays, science and technology can predict volcanic eruptions. They can also measure the range of the damage and know the places that are safe or not. 

 

For example, some tools volcanologists use to is tilt meter.

- For example, one of the tools that volcanologists use is tiltmeter.

 

This mean scientist know where the damage go.

- The scientist can know the areas that will be affected.

 

This reason is important because when people know how far can damage go the pen some where need to prepare.
-  It is important because if people know how far can the damage go they can prepare for it.

 

Are you live in ring of Fire?

- Do you live in the Ring of Fire?

 

No then you don’t have to prepare for that. Volcano can’t possibly happen every where, scientist can measure range of volcano damage.

- If your answer is no, then you don't have to prepare for that. Volcanic eruptions can happen anywhere. The scientist can measure the range of volcano damage.

 

When you are live in far away from volcanoes, you don’t that can be waste.

- If you live far away from a volcano, you don't have to worry.

 

Don’t you think waste is bad and you can use that money for another so, you don’t have to prepare for volcano.

- Don't you think it's just a waste? You can use your money for something else. You don't have to prepare for it.


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