My one request is that please copy of my original sentence, and then highlight in red with correction.
I made a mini-farm using available wooden box after the English class, and then went Paxis to buy some soil.
My children wanted to go outside so I packed fruits, drinking water and crackers.
We got around near my town and went up a hill so we could see a picturesque scenery.
When I checked email, there was an emali from real estate agent that tap water is not still working for my house in Amsterdam.
Thus I had to contact the building management team but their service was not sufficient for me to solve the problem.
In the evening, my best friend came to my house without any notification on the way to take a walk.
We drank a couple of beers and mainly talked about a family dinner on coming Thursday.
Hi Jo,
My one request is that please copy of my original sentence, and then highlight in red with correction.
I made a mini-farm using available wooden box after the English class, and then went Paxis to buy some soil.
My children wanted to go outside so I packed fruits, drinking water and crackers.
We got around near my town and went up a hill so we could see a picturesque scenery.
When I checked email, there was an emali from real estate agent that tap water is not still working for my house in Amsterdam.
Thus I had to contact the building management team but their service was not sufficient for me to solve the problem.
In the evening, my best friend came to my house without any notification on the way to take a walk.
We drank a couple of beers and mainly talked about a family dinner on coming Thursday.
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Hi Jo,
My one request is that please copy of my original sentence, and then highlight it in red with correction.
After the English class, I made a mini-farm using the available wooden box , and then went to Paxis to buy some soil.
My children wanted to go outside, so I packed fruits, drinking water, and crackers.
We got around near my town and went up a hill so we could see a picturesque scenery.
When I checked the email, there was an email from the real estate agent that tap water is not still working for my house in Amsterdam.
Thus I had to contact the building management team but their service was not sufficient for me to solve the problem.
In the evening, my best friend came to my house without any notification on the way to take a walk.
We drank a couple of beers and mainly talked about a family dinner on the / this coming Thursday.
