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Q7. We overlook a lot of vital trivial and routine things that actually make us happy. Name some "unimportant" things that are vital to your happiness.
A. I think sleeping well is one of an important things that we usually overlook routine things. If we have a lot of things to do, we usually sacrifice our sleeping time and alternate it with working time. Although having a good sleep seems natual and a routine that we do not count as an important thing, sleeping well make us healthy and revitalize our health by which we can earn money and have happy time with our family and friends. Thus, keeping a routine sleeping time is a very important thing that we consider it as a trivial thing.

Q8. Do you think he is always happy?
A. I don't think he is always happy. Since our desire knows no ends, the desire will make him eager for having more better things if he does not satisfy with what he has. Moreover, he cannot expect every accidents. He can suffer the accident by a car crash or by illness or bad relationship with his people. Therefore, even thogh someone has everything, he could not happy always.

Q7. We overlook a lot of vital trivial and routine things that actually make us happy. Name some "unimportant" things that are vital to your happiness.
A. I think sleeping well is one of an important things that we usually overlook routine things. If we have a lot of things to do, we usually sacrifice our sleeping time and alternate it with working time. Although having a good sleep seems natual and a routine that we do not count as an important thing, sleeping well make us healthy and revitalize our health by which we can earn money and have happy time with our family and friends. Thus, keeping a routine sleeping time is a very important thing that we consider it as a trivial thing.

Q8. Do you think he is always happy?
A. I don't think he is always happy. Since our desire knows no ends, the desire will make him eager for having more better things if he does not satisfy with what he has. Moreover, he cannot expect every accidents. He can suffer the accident by a car crash or by illness or bad relationship with his people. Therefore, even thogh someone has everything, he could not happy always. Corrections: Q7. We overlook a lot of vital trivial and routine things that actually make us happy. Name some "unimportant" things that are vital to your happiness. Ans: 1. I think sleeping well is one of the important things that we usually overlook in our routine things. If we have a lot of things to do, we usually sacrifice our sleeping time and alternate it with working time. Although having a good sleep seems natural and a routine that we do not count as an important thing. Sleeping well make us healthy and revitalize our health. Being healthy while working can help us earn money and have a happy time with our family and friends. Thus, keeping a good sleeping routine is very important, that we usually consider it as a trivial thing. Q8. Do you think he is always happy? Ans. I don't think he is always happy. Since our desire knows no ends. The desire will make him eager for having more better things. If he does not satisfy with what he has; he can suffer from an accident like a car crash or by illness or any bad relationship with his people. Therefore, even though someone has everything, he could not happy be always.

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