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6.What do you think of cashier-less stores?
To begin with,
There are many positive aspects and one of them is we can save our time and energy when we go shopping.
That's because we don't need to wait for a long line to checkout.
All we have to to is just scan the app and put something to buy in our bag.
Anothing thing that we can get a benifit is that easy and convenient payment system.
it charges the costs to your account automatically if you just put them in your bag.
Also, for store owners, they don't need a lot of employee to hire. It means that they can save labor costs which account for a big part in case of running their bussiness.
However, there are also negative views on this cashier less store.
I think store would have less humanity and people would feel like they don't have actual conversation with staff and make our atmosphere more desolate.
The biggest problem is that the fact that this software will replace human's job and people wi lose their job.

6.What do you think of cashier-less stores?
To begin with,
There are many positive aspects and one of them is we can save our time and energy when we go shopping. There are many advantages I can think of and one of those is to save time and energy when I go shopping.
That's because we I don't need to wait for a long line to checkout.
All we have to to do is just scan the app and put something to buy the items we purchased in our the bag.
Anothing thing that we can get a benifit is that easy and convenient payment system. Another benefit we can get from this is the convenience of the payment system. 
it charges the costs to your account automatically if you just put them in your bag. The charges will automatically be deducted in your account. 
Also, for store owners, they don't need a lot of employee to hire. It means that they can save labor costs which account for a big part in case of running their bussiness.
However, there are also negative views on this cashier less store.
I think, storewould have less humanity and people would feel like they don't have actual conversation with staff and make our atmosphere more desolate.
The biggest problem is that the fact that this software will replace human's job and people will lose their job.

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