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Shopping with my mom♥♥♥

Today I went shopping (dating) with my mom.I
wanted Lucy to come with us but Lucy said she will
rather make a mermaid than following us to the shopping
mall. Still I love~~~~~~going shopping with my mom!♡
First we went to a clothing store.I saw a blue and white
dress.That instance my eye's kept moving to the dress(So
I brought it^^)
Soon we got very hot and thirsty so we went to a near shop and
drank the sweet and cold drink.After a little rest I went to a
shop named "Art Box".Because it was Children's Day and I wanted to buy a gift
to Lucy.But.........the store was closed ㅜ.ㅜ.ㅜ
Today was a great day! I wish Lucy could come next time~~~~

Today I went shopping (dating) with my mom.I
wanted Lucy to come with us but Lucy said she will
rather make a mermaid than following us to the shopping
mall. Still I love~~~~~~going shopping with my mom!♡
First we went to a clothing store.I saw a blue and white
dress.That instance my eye's kept moving to the dress(So
I brought it^^)
Soon we got very hot and thirsty so we went to a near shop and
drank the sweet and cold drink.After a little rest I went to a
shop named "Art Box".Because it was Children's Day and I wanted to buy a gift
to Lucy.But.........the store was closed ㅜ.ㅜ.ㅜ
Today was a great day! I wish Lucy could come next time~~~~

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Today I went shopping (had a date) with my mom. I

wanted Lucy to come with us but Lucy said she would rather make a mermaid than coming with us to the shopping mall. Still, I love~~~~~~going shopping with my mom!♡

First, we went to a clothing store. I saw a blue and white dress. That instantly kept  my eye's looking back to the dress (So

I brought it^^)

Soon we felt very hot and thirsty so we went to a nearby shop and drank the sweet and cold drink. After a little rest, I went to a

shop named "Art Box". Because it was Children's Day and I wanted to buy a gift for Lucy but.........the store was closed ㅜ.ㅜ.ㅜ

Today was a great day! I wish Lucy could come next time~~~~


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