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Today's subject is for surrogate mother.

In KOREA, this is not ordinary subject. in movies and old dramas I watched this happened.
but, these days it's hard to hear that and also many young people don't know this happen.
the fact is the surrogate mother is victim to earn the money, even they are doing true donation situations that is not ethical situation.
anyhow produce offspring makes motherhood (mother's love). it will be very hard for surrogate mothers to give their babies to them who had given sperm.
maybe some countries still are operating this legally but, this also not usually heard that. it means most of countries also operating this illegally.
merely alternative way is adoption in my opinion, also our all planet people should encourage to adopt babies who are abandoned by their real parents. we need to take care of it over the nationally. we are closing between countries more and more so following the common sense and rule for other countries also one of the consideration for our lives.

Today's subject is for surrogate mother.

In Korea, this is not an ordinary/common subject. I have only watched this happen in movies and old dramas.
But these days, it's hard/difficult to hear that and many young people don't know this happens.
The fact is that the surrogate mother is a victim who wants to earn money. Even when they are in true donation situations, it's not ethical. 
Any way to produce offspring makes/initiates motherhood (mother's love). It will be very hard for surrogate mothers to give their babies to the people who had given the sperm/sperm donor.
Some countries may still be operating/doing this legally, but isn't usually heard of. It means most/many countries also operate/do this illegally.
The only alternative way is adoption in my opinion. Also, everyone in the world should encourage adopting babies who are abandoned by their real parents. We need to take care of it over the nationally. We are getting closer to countries more and more, so following the common sense and rule/law for other countries is also one of the considerations for our lives.


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