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Firsty, the sources of the contents are different. There are a lot of quoted words in both of articles. In Korean one, those words are mostly from the Chinese researchers or professors. On the other hand, there are relatively many quoted words that were said by Western universities’ professors or scientists on the article of NBC. I couldn’t really know which one is more truthful because what they are saying are pretty much the same.

Secondly, how it is important to know the cause of the COVID? Opinions on this question are different. I can see this difference from the very first part of the articles. NBC wrote ‘finding the source wouldn't necessarily help scientists develop vaccines or other direct treatments’. On the other side of the coin, Korean one is saying that we need to know how the virus passed to human so that we can fundamentally block the virus. Well, I know their opinions are from different aspects. NBC is focused about developing vaccines and Korean is about blocking the virus so that there will be no more people getting the virus. But it’s kind of interesting because I’ve always thought that it’s very important to figure it out to develop vaccines. I guess it’s because Korean journals has been obsessed with finding the cause of the virus. So I unconsciously thought that it would be very important. Now I think maybe we just needed something to shift the blame on.

Firstly, the sources of the contents are different. There are a lot of quoted words in both articles. In Korean, those words are mostly from the Chinese researchers or professors. On the other hand, there are relatively many quoted words that were said by Western universities’ professors or scientists on the article of NBC. I couldn’t really know which one is more truthful because what they are saying are pretty much the same.

Secondly, how it is important to know the cause of the COVID? Opinions on this question are different. I can see this difference from the very first part of the articles. NBC wrote ‘finding the source wouldn't necessarily help scientists develop vaccines or other direct treatments’. On the other side of the coin, Korean one is saying that we need to know how the virus passed to human so that we can fundamentally block the virus. Well, I know their opinions are from different aspects. NBC is focused about developing vaccines and Korean is about blocking the virus so that there will be no more people getting the virus. But it’s kind of interesting because I’ve always thought that it’s very important to figure it out to develop vaccines. I guess it’s because Korean journals have been obsessed with finding the cause of the virus. So, I unconsciously thought that it would be very important. Now, I think maybe we just need something to shift the blame on.


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