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2020-04-06 첨삭요청드려요

Last week, I stop to do everything.
For example to study English and on-line shopping mall web site.
Because I felt lethargic.
I was so hard mentally and physically.
I took a rest for a week, and I felt anxiety.
I filled with this thought ‘may I stay in this style? is it okay?’
Except for me, Many people study so hard anything, because they want to get a job and (to) move another welfare company.
But I didn’t do it.
Although I have all thing and stay good enviroment , I disappointed to me

Today I will start. I attempt to study English and (to) open about online shopping mall.
It is so hard to me but I must do it.
If I will study English steadily someday it will help me.

Last week, I stop to do everything.
For example to study English and on-line shopping mall web site.
Because I felt lethargic.
I was so hard mentally and physically.
I took a rest for a week, and I felt anxiety.
I filled with this thought ‘may I stay in this style? is it okay?’
Except for me, Many people study so hard anything, because they want to get a job and (to) move another welfare company.
But I didn’t do it.
Although I have all thing and stay good enviroment , I disappointed to me

Today I will start. I attempt to study English and (to) open about online shopping mall.
It is so hard to me but I must do it.
If I will study English steadily someday it will help me.

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Last week, I stopped doing everything. 

For example, studying English and on-line shopping mall web site.

Because I felt lethargic. 

I was so hard mentally and physically. 

I took a rest for a week, and I felt anxious.

I filled with this thought ‘may I stay in this style? is it okay?’ 

Except for me, Many people study so hard anything, because they want to get a job and to move to another welfare company. 

But I didn’t do it. 

Although I have all the things and stays in a good environment, I disappointed my self.


Today I will start. I was attempted to study English and open online shopping malls. 

It is so hard for me but I must do it. 

If I will study English steadily someday it will help me.


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