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31th March

It was bored and gloomy Tuesday.


When will finish corona virus on earth?
My son enter the elementary school this year as a first year student but he must not go to there now.
As a result, I neither can't go anywhere alone over one month.
sigh...



After sunset, my son and I went to a flower shop with wearing masks.
Because we can't go any flowers festival or trip.
So we arrived at the flower shop and looked around there for a long time.


My son was interested in all kind of cactus and I liked colorful flowers.
So we bought one cactus and bunch of beautiful flowers. ^^
The scent of flowers made ours happy and cheerful.


I put them on the dinning table.
And we look at the flowers every day.


It's Spring.
Although sad spring, I'll cheer up myself and I'm going to play with my son joyfully more than today at home.

It was bored and gloomy Tuesday.
 
---It was a boring and gloomy Tuesday.
 
When will finish corona virus on earth?
 
---When will this COVID-19 pandemic end?
 
 
My son enter the elementary school this year as a first year student but he must not go to there now.
 
---My son is going to enter the elementary school this year as a first grade student, but he can't go there yet.
 
 
As a result, I neither can't go anywhere alone over one month.
 
---As a result, I can't go neither anywhere alone for over a month.
 
 
sigh...
 
 
After sunset, my son and I went to a flower shop with wearing masks. Because we can't go any flowers festival or trip.
 
---After sunset, my son and I went to a flower shop. We wore face masks  because we couldn't go to any flower festival or trips.
 
 
So we arrived at the flower shop and looked around there for a long time.
 
---So we arrived at the flower shop and looked around for a long time.
 
 
My son was interested in all kind of cactus and I liked colorful flowers.
 
---My son was interested in all kinds of cacti (or cactuses) and I liked colorful flowers. NOTE: Both cacti and cactuses are acceptable. But cacti is the more common plural of cactus.
 
So we bought one cactus and bunch of beautiful flowers. ^^
 
---So we bought one cactus and a bunch of beautiful flowers.
 
The scent of flowers made ours happy and cheerful.
 
---The scent of flowers made us happy and cheerful.
 
 
I put them on the dinning table. And we look at the flowers every day.
 
---I put them on the dining table, so we can look at the flowers every day.
 
 
It's Spring.
 
----It's spring.
 
 
Although sad spring, I'll cheer up myself and I'm going to play with my son joyfully more than today at home.
 
---Although it's a sad spring, I'll cheer myself up and I'm going to play with my son more joyfully today at home.
 

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