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My working place is located outside of our park. So many customers ask me many things before they enter the park. I want to prepare about those situations. Thank you teacher!

Introduction about our park.

Welcome to our park! We had a lot of attractions and entertainments such as various types of roller coaster and exiting rides for adults and kids, both of all! And our park was divided by inside and outside. So if you buy a ticket, we sell only one type of ticket which is free pass, so if you buy this ticket at that ticket office, you can enjoy everything in inside and outside, everywhere. It’s very good because we don’t take any whether’s affections. Also we have parades at 8p.m. So you can enjoy it as well. But I recommend you ask inside workers again because the parades time could be changed because of whether or other’s reason.
And I want to let you know that basically once you enter our park and out of there, you cannot reenter that park again. But you tell inside workers before you go out of there about your situations that why you go out and have to come in again, maybe they permit to come in again. So I recommend if you come in again, you tell them about your situations first before you go out of there. Thank you!

My working place is located outside of our park. So many customers ask me many things before they enter the park. I want to prepare about those situations. Thank you teacher!

Introduction about our park.

Welcome to our park! We had a lot of attractions and entertainments such as various types of roller coaster and exiting rides for adults and kids, both of all! And our park was divided by inside and outside. So if you buy a ticket, we sell only one type of ticket which is free pass, so if you buy this ticket at that ticket office, you can enjoy everything in inside and outside, everywhere. It’s very good because we don’t take any whether’s affections. Also we have parades at 8p.m. So you can enjoy it as well. But I recommend you ask inside workers again because the parades time could be changed because of whether or other’s reason.
And I want to let you know that basically once you enter our park and out of there, you cannot reenter that park again. But you tell inside workers before you go out of there about your situations that why you go out and have to come in again, maybe they permit to come in again. So I recommend if you come in again, you tell them about your situations first before you go out of there. Thank you!

 

My working place is located outside of our park. So many customers ask me many things before they enter the park. I want to prepare about those situations. Thank you teacher! 

Introduction about our park.
 

Welcome to Lotte World! We have lots of attractions and entertainments here such as, various types of roller coaster and exciting rides for adults and kids! It is divided by indoor and outdoor. If you want to buy the ticket, you can purchase it at the ticketing office. We only sell one type of ticket which is a free pass ticket. It’s good because rain or shine we are always open so you can enjoy everything from indoor to outdoor! We have a parade that starts at 8 p.m. but I  recommend you to ask the staff inside because the parade's time might change due to weather or other types of reasons. You can enjoy it as well.

I want you to know that, once you enter the park and go out, you can't enter unless you'll pay for the ticket again. If you want to go out because of some reason, just tell the staff inside and explain why you want to go out, then maybe they will grant your request to enter the park without paying again. Thank you!


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