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2020-03-30 첨삭요청드려요

Last weekend it was sunny. In fact I don’t like take a walk, but the weather was so good, so I wanted to go for a walk.
When People forget the Corono-virus, many people got off to see the flowers.
I wanted to go outside, but I could not do this.
I took a walk with my elder brother at late night. There was no one in the park near my apartment.
While we went for a walk, we drank a cup of coffee and talked each other
As come back my home, I asked to my brother. please take me appearance from behind !!
He took a picutre. but I was not satisfied this picutre.
1 minute harsh naggging after He took a picture and showed me it.I liked it.
I uploaded this picutre my kakao account.
Because why I uploaded this picture, I wanted show this picutre for ex-boyfriend.
I live well without you and Are you curious who took a this picutre?
I'm writting my diary in company, I felt so childish to me.
I ashamed as a moment.
I don't know why i behave

Last weekend it was sunny. In fact I don’t like take a walk, but the weather was so good, so I wanted to go for a walk.
When People forget the Corono-virus, many people got off to see the flowers.
I wanted to go outside, but I could not do this.
I took a walk with my elder brother at late night. There was no one in the park near my apartment.
While we went for a walk, we drank a cup of coffee and talked each other
As come back my home, I asked to my brother. please take me appearance from behind !!
He took a picutre. but I was not satisfied this picutre.
1 minute harsh naggging after He took a picture and showed me it.I liked it.
I uploaded this picutre my kakao account.
Because why I uploaded this picture, I wanted show this picutre for ex-boyfriend.
I live well without you and Are you curious who took a this picutre?
I'm writting my diary in company, I felt so childish to me.
I ashamed as a moment.
I don't know why i behave

 

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Last weekend it was sunny. In fact, I don’t like to take a walk, but the weather was so good, so I wanted to go for a walk. 

When People forget the Corona-virus, many people got off to see the flowers.

I wanted to go outside, but I could not do this. 

I took a walk with my older brother late at night. There was no one in the park near my apartment.

While we went for a walk, we drink a cup of coffee and talked to each other 

As we come back home, I asked my brother to please take a picture of my appearance from behind !! 

He took a picture but I was not satisfied with this picture. 

1-minute harsh nagging after he took a picture and showed it to me.  I liked it so

I uploaded this picture to my kakao account. 

The reason why I uploaded this picture, because I wanted to show this picture to my ex-boyfriend. 

I live well without you and if he's curious who took this picture of me? 

I'm writing my diary in the company, I felt so childish to my self. 

I'm ashamed as a moment.

I don't know why I behave like this.


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