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Maleficent review

2020/03/23
Maleficent review

I watched Maleficent the movie yesterday. The movie was really interesting. Disney film always works things. But Disney film is always the same. Most of the final scene in Disney is "They all lived happily ever after." Maleficent is the same. It was too obvious. The only difference is that not accentuate love about between a man and woman but shows difference love. For example, Love for a child, It is like The affection to foster is stronger than the affection to give birth and more. I believe in true love but animation films today always have shown story of love at first sight between a princess and prince. I am fed up with this story. So Maleficent the movie was so fresh.
And I have a further question concerning the Maleficent. I don't know why did he change of his (Stephan) heart all of sudden. Was he a bad person from the beginning? Or did he love her (Maleficent) and the changed his mind?
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Thank you for reading.

2020/03/23
Maleficent review

I watched Maleficent the movie yesterday. The movie was really interesting. Disney film always works things. But Disney film is always the same. Most of the final scene in Disney is "They all lived happily ever after." Maleficent is the same. It was too obvious. The only difference is that not accentuate love about between a man and woman but shows difference love. For example, Love for a child, It is like The affection to foster is stronger than the affection to give birth and more. I believe in true love but animation films today always have shown story of love at first sight between a princess and prince. I am fed up with this story. So Maleficent the movie was so fresh.
And I have a further question concerning the Maleficent. I don't know why did he change of his (Stephan) heart all of sudden. Was he a bad person from the beginning? Or did he love her (Maleficent) and the changed his mind?
.
Thank you for reading.

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2020/03/23

Maleficent review


I watched Maleficent the movie yesterday. The movie was really interesting. Disney film always works things. But Disney film is always the same. Most of the final scene in Disney is "They all lived happily ever after." Maleficent is the same. It was too obvious. The only difference is that not accentuate love between a man and a woman but shows different love. For example, Love for a child, It is like the affection to foster is stronger than the affection to give birth and more. I believe in true love but animation films today always have shown a story of love at first sight between a princess and prince. I am fed up with this story. So Maleficent the movie was so fresh. 

And I have a further question concerning the Maleficent. I don't know why did he change his (Stephan) heart all of a sudden. Was he a bad person from the beginning? Or did he love her (Maleficent) and then changed his mind? 

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Thank you for reading.


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