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The following is a text of today's conversation. Please, correct my text.

The call I just made is the wrong one.Becase I use this app frist time so I don't know how do I use it. So I hit the button by mistake. So please don't care about that missed call.
Now I'm working as a parttime job as a interpreter. I want to work in service field. So I'm between jobs.
Generally I like to play basketball, hiking and swimming.
I think I'm social oriented person so I really like team sports. So I try to find a teamsports team and find out female basketball team and then I started learning basketball.
First, I'm so happy when I'm with people and like sweating a lot. Basketball helps I sweat a lot and gives me a chance to play with many people. And when we make a wonderful goal, at that time I can feel the feeling of flying in the sky, really nice. So I love basketball.
Before this year, I used playing basketball in every sunday morning. But this year, I started my weekend part time job so I couldn't go sunday's gathering any more. But still I enjoy basketball whenever I have some time.

 
I can say that I am a social-oriented and an athletic person at the same time. Socializing with other people makes me happy. While I was finding a sport that engages in an activity with a team, I found out about the female basketball team and joined it. Basketball became my favorite team sport as well as hiking and swimming. It makes me sweaty whenever I play basketball every Sunday morning with my friends. It is also a good chance to interact with other people and aim for the same goal.
 I started working on my part-time job during weekends. However, it became the reason why my time of playing basketball became limited. But that didn't stop me from doing what I love, and that is playing basketball.
 

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