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which do you want to live with a cat or dog?

2020. 3. 19

Q : which do you want to live with a cat or dog?

Actually, I like both. But if I have a choice either a cat, or dog, I will choose a dog. The reason I chose dog is because three basis.
The first reason is I want to walk with my feet to the park in the morning. But cats don't like to walk. They love to climb high place, love to groom. Unlike a cat, dog like to walk.
The second reason is dog usually obey their owners. I'm happy that I can communicate with my pet.
The last of these reasons is by far the most important.
The last reason is cat shed a lot. I have an allergy to animal hair a little bit. When I stay some place that air condition is not good in, it's a little bit hardly for me to breathe. That is why it's uneasy to live with animal that shed a lot.
Because of this reason I prefer living with a dog to the cat.
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Thank you for reading

2020. 3. 19

Q : which do you want to live with a cat or dog?

Actually, I like both. But if I have a choice either a cat, or dog, I will choose a dog. The reason I chose dog is because three basis.
The first reason is I want to walk with my feet to the park in the morning. But cats don't like to walk. They love to climb high place, love to groom. Unlike a cat, dog like to walk.
The second reason is dog usually obey their owners. I'm happy that I can communicate with my pet.
The last of these reasons is by far the most important.
The last reason is cat shed a lot. I have an allergy to animal hair a little bit. When I stay some place that air condition is not good in, it's a little bit hardly for me to breathe. That is why it's uneasy to live with animal that shed a lot.
Because of this reason I prefer living with a dog to the cat.
.
Thank you for reading

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2020. 3. 19


Q: Which do you want to live with, a cat or a dog?


I like both. But if I have a choice with either a cat or a dog, I will choose a dog. The reason I chose a dog is because of three bases.

The first reason is I want to walk with my feet to the park in the morning. But cats don't like to walk. They love to climb high places and love to groom. Unlike a cat, dogs like to walk. 

The second reason is dog usually obey their owners. I'm happy that I can communicate with my pet. 

The last of these reasons is by far the most important.

The last reason is the cat shreds a lot. I have an allergy to animal hair a little bit. When I stay someplace that air condition is not good, it's a little bit hard for me to breathe. That is why it's uneasy to live with an animal that shreds a lot. 

Because of this reason I prefer living with a dog to the cat.

.

Thank you for reading


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