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2020.03.12
Dear diary
Today I woke up at 11 am. It's so late. And I showered in hot water and had a lunch. I like to shower in hot water. I had ramen for lunch. Actually, I don't eat well because it's annoying to make food. Ha-ha and I had a badminton appointment with a friend at 1 pm. So I went to the gym. I played badminton with my friend ha young who I met for a long time no see. It was funny. But we didn't play badminton well... Though we played hard. And we played a game that buying ice cream for the winner. We played badminton very hard. And we had a break time. We were resting, suddenly elementary school students came into the gym. So we stepped out. To be frank, we wanted to continue playing badminton, but there were a lot of elementary students, lol. Anyway, after exercising, we were getting hungry. So we went to the McDonald's. There I had a chicken burger and ha young had a cheeseburger. And I bought ice cream.;;; then I came home and took a shower. And I read a book called bear Grylls. The author of this book is bear Grylls. Bear Grylls is a famous British explorer. And this book is a novel about surviving in Alaska. The book recommended by ha young. The book wasn't bad. Just not bad. These days, I have a lot of time at home. Because of the corona virus. I went outside in a week today. I don't know how long I stay at home, but I hope things get better soon. And the semester beings with a cyber lecture starting next Monday. OMG I hate it so much

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hi chloe teacher. good afternoon
Thank you for reading.
Thank you for reply

2020.03.12
Dear diary
Today I woke up at 11 am. It's so late. And I showered in hot water and had a lunch. I like to shower in hot water. I had ramen for lunch. Actually, I don't eat well because it's annoying to make food. Ha-ha and I had a badminton appointment with a friend at 1 pm. So I went to the gym. I played badminton with my friend ha young who I met for a long time no see. It was funny. But we didn't play badminton well... Though we played hard. And we played a game that buying ice cream for the winner. We played badminton very hard. And we had a break time. We were resting, suddenly elementary school students came into the gym. So we stepped out. To be frank, we wanted to continue playing badminton, but there were a lot of elementary students, lol. Anyway, after exercising, we were getting hungry. So we went to the McDonald's. There I had a chicken burger and ha young had a cheeseburger. And I bought ice cream.;;; then I came home and took a shower. And I read a book called bear Grylls. The author of this book is bear Grylls. Bear Grylls is a famous British explorer. And this book is a novel about surviving in Alaska. The book recommended by ha young. The book wasn't bad. Just not bad. These days, I have a lot of time at home. Because of the corona virus. I went outside in a week today. I don't know how long I stay at home, but I hope things get better soon. And the semester beings with a cyber lecture starting next Monday. OMG I hate it so much

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hi chloe teacher. good afternoon
Thank you for reading.
Thank you for reply

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2020.03.12

Dear diary


Today I woke up at 11 am which is so late. I had a hot water shower and had lunch. I like to take a shower in hot water. I had ramen for lunch. I don't eat well because it's annoying to make food. Ha-ha and I had a badminton appointment with a friend at 1 pm. So I went to the gym. I played badminton with my friend Ha-Young who I haven't see for a long time. We had fun but we didn't play badminton well... Though we played hard and we played a game that whoever wins will get ice cream. We played badminton very hard and we had a break time. We were resting, suddenly elementary school students came into the gym. So we stepped out. To be frank, we wanted to continue playing badminton, but there were a lot of elementary students, lol. Anyway, after exercising, we got hungry so we went to McDonald's. There, I had a chicken burger and Ha-Young had a cheeseburger and I bought ice cream. I came home and took a shower, then I read a book called bear Grylls. The author of this book is Bear Grylls. Bear Grylls is a famous British explorer and this book is a novel about surviving in Alaska. The book recommended by Ha-Young. The book is not that bad. These days, I have a lot of time at home, because of the coronavirus. I went outside in a week today. I don't know how long I stay at home, but I hope things will get better soon. The semester begins with a cyber lecture starting next Monday. OMG I hate it so much

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Hi Teacher Chloe. good afternoon

Thank you for reading. 

Thank you for reply

 

Hello Jinah,

    I appreciate your effort in doing your composition. I know that you are trying your best to make this. I would like to congratulate you for overcoming your shyness and quietness in our class. You are now able to express your thoughts well.

 


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