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I went to register my son's summer camp. There were long line up.
I waited for a long time to register it. I heard It's so nice and had a reasonable price.
I'll expect his summer camp. I hope he like it.
He wanted go out for a lunch. l took him to a nice restaurant. It was really nice. We ate so much food; salad, steak, putin, dessert etc. After lunch, I decided to go swimming in the apartment. We had fun for a long time.
I cleaned up a lot this evening; washed clothes and dishes,cooked, sweeped the floor.
I was so tired. But I was so happy it's very clean.

I went to register my son's summer camp. There were long line up.
I waited for a long time to register it. I heard It's so nice and had a reasonable price.
I'll expect his summer camp. I hope he like it.
He wanted go out for a lunch. l took him to a nice restaurant. It was really nice. We ate so much food; salad, steak, putin, dessert etc. After lunch, I decided to go swimming in the apartment. We had fun for a long time.
I cleaned up a lot this evening; washed clothes and dishes,cooked, sweeped the floor.
I was so tired. But I was so happy it's very clean.

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I went to register for my son's summer camp. There was a long line up.

I waited for a long time to register it. I heard It's so nice and had a reasonable price. I'll expect his summer camp. I hope he likes it.

He wanted to go out for lunch. l took him to a nice restaurant. It was really nice. We ate so much food; salad, steak, poutine, dessert, etc. After lunch, I decided to go swimming in the apartment. We had fun for a long time. 

I cleaned up a lot this evening; washed clothes and dishes, cooked and swept the floor.

I was so tired. But I was so happy it's very clean.


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