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I want to go out

yesterday, I wanted to go hang out with friends. so I made a appointment with my friends.
when I was going to go outside. my mom said me "outside is very dangerous, because of the coronavirus.
so you can't go out there." and I said her "you can say that again.
but I can't stay at home all day until the coronavirus is over. And you and dad, dong huck( my brother) are go out there.
I feel like i'm in prison. if you were in my shoes, you would feel very frustrated. please Let me play with my friend today." and mom said me " you know that dad and dong huck and me are out for work. and if you are bored at home all day, read books or study english or watch movies." and I said her "are you pulling my leg? This is not good solution that I want."
.
.
Eventually I did not go out.
.
.
and I watched movie. the title of the movie is harry potter. It is my favorite movie. and it is a famous movie that almost people knows. To make a long story short, if you see harry potter, you want to believe that there is magic.

thank you for reading.

yesterday, I wanted to go hang out with friends. so I made a appointment with my friends.
when I was going to go outside. my mom said me "outside is very dangerous, because of the coronavirus.
so you can't go out there." and I said her "you can say that again.
but I can't stay at home all day until the coronavirus is over. And you and dad, dong huck( my brother) are go out there.
I feel like i'm in prison. if you were in my shoes, you would feel very frustrated. please Let me play with my friend today." and mom said me " you know that dad and dong huck and me are out for work. and if you are bored at home all day, read books or study english or watch movies." and I said her "are you pulling my leg? This is not good solution that I want."
.
.
Eventually I did not go out.
.
.
and I watched movie. the title of the movie is harry potter. It is my favorite movie. and it is a famous movie that almost people knows. To make a long story short, if you see harry potter, you want to believe that there is magic.

thank you for reading.

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Yesterday, I wanted to go hang out with my friends. So I made an appointment with them. When I was going outside my mom told me that "It is very dangerous outside, because of the coronavirus. 

so you can't go out there" and I said to her "you can say that again,

but I can't stay at home all day until the coronavirus is over. You, dad and dong huck( my brother) are going out there. I feel like I'm in prison. if you were in my shoes, you would feel very frustrated. please Let me play with my friend today." and mom said to me " You know that dad, dong huck and I are out for work and if you are bored at home all day, read books or study English or watch movies." and I said to her "are you pulling my leg? This is not a good solution that I want." 

.

.

Eventually, I did not go out.

.

.

So I just watched a movie. The title of the movie is Harry Potter. It is my favorite movie and it is a famous movie that most people know. To make a long story short, if you see Harry Potter, you want to believe that there is magic.


Thank you for reading.

 

Hi Jihna, 

You did all the idiom expressions that we studied in your sentence so well. I'm so glad to see your improvement in writing. Keep it up!


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