2020-03-06 첨삭요청드려요

I have a life specific plan.
First, I must master overall work in company, before the age of 30.
Second of all, I will manage company and try to hard top of 10 industry , before my age of 35.
third, I will make a chance my company , all over the world. Also I’ll make a foreign company office.

So far, If I have a plan something, I achieved all thing.
It is not easy to me, but I will try to hard, I must do it.

I have a life specific plan.
First, I must master overall work in company, before the age of 30.
Second of all, I will manage company and try to hard top of 10 industry , before my age of 35.
third, I will make a chance my company , all over the world. Also I’ll make a foreign company office.

So far, If I have a plan something, I achieved all thing.
It is not easy to me, but I will try to hard, I must do it.

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I have a life specific plan. 

First of all, I must master overall work in the company, before the age of 30. Second, I will manage the company and try hard to be one of the top 10 industry, before the age of 35. Third, I will take a chance at my company, all over the world. Lastly, I’ll make a foreign company office.

So far, If I have a plan on something, I achieved all of it. It is not easy for me, but I will try hard, I must do it.