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영어 첨삭부탁드립니다.

A week ago, I broke up with my boyfriend.
He character is very considerable and whatever his choice, I was first of all.
He loved me so thankful But we were different to solve this problem.

We have a problem, he was always waiting without talking. Before I was talking or behavior anything
I wanted to talk (to) solve this problem with him. Maybe I think that he was not.
Pass the time, I thought that I forced him

And I left teddy bear and letters and many of pictures with him.
Sometimes I miss him. But I never contact to him.
I will work hard, and exercise, and study English.
I hope to pass the time.....

영어 첨삭부탁드립니다.

A week ago, I broke up with my boyfriend. 
He character is very considerable and whatever his choice, I was first of all. = His personality is very considerate and he considers my decisions above all things.
He loved me so thankful But we were different to solve this problem. = He loved me so I'm thankful for it but we have our ways in solving this problem.

We have a problem, he was always waiting without talking. Before I was talking or behavior anything = Whenever we have a problem, he only listens without saying anything. I was the one who wants to talk about it and share my opinions.
I wanted to talk (to) solve this problem with him. Maybe I think that he was not. = I wanted the both of us to solve the problem together but I think he doesn't want to do anything.
Pass the time, I thought that I forced him = As time goes by, I thought I was forcing him to do something.

And I left teddy bear and letters and many of pictures with him. = I left him a teddy bear with letters and pictures of our moments together.
Sometimes I miss him. But I never contact to him. = I miss him sometimes but I never tried to contact him.
I will work hard, and exercise, and study English. = I will work harder, exercise and study English.
I hope to pass the time..... = I hope that I'll be able to recover.


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