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Self introduction

My name is Yunhye.
You can just call me "Hye". That's my English name.
Most of foriegners can't sound out my name. That's why I choose my english name.
I'm 28 years old in Korean age and 26 years old in western age.
Actually, I like my western age better because I feel younger.

I'm not married and living alone in Seoul which is the capital of Korea.
In my family, there are 5 people; father, mother, elder brother, younger brother, and me.
I've been working for an online shopping mall for 2 years as merchandiser.
I'm looking for another job now, so I need a good score on OPIc test to get a better job.

In my free time, I like to play the piano.
These days, I practice Waltz in minor of Chopin.
When it comes to my personality, I get along well with people. I enjoy spending time with my friends.

Finally I want to tell you my motto.
My motto is "Nothing is stronger than habit."
I think it's important to get good habits.

Self introduction

My name is Yunhye.

--- I am Yunhye.


You can just call me "Hye". It's my English name.


Most of foriegners can't sound out my name. That's why I choose my english name.

--- Most foreigners can't sound out or pronounce my Korean name, that's why I chose my English name.


I'm 28 years old in Korean age and 26 years old in western age.

--- I'm 28 years old in Korean age and 26 years old in Western age.


Actually, I like my western age better because I feel younger.

---Actually, I like my Western age better because I feel younger.

I'm not married and living alone in Seoul which is the capital of Korea.

---I'm still single and live alone in Seoul, which is the capital of South Korea.


In my family, there are 5 people; father, mother, elder brother, younger brother, and me.

---There are 5 people in my family - my father, mother, elder/older brother, younger brother and me.


I've been working for an online shopping mall for 2 years as merchandiser.

--- I've been working as a merchandiser for an online shopping mall for 2 years.

I'm looking for another job now, so I need a good score on OPIc test to get a better job.

---I'm looking for another job now, so I need to get a good score of the OPIC test for better job opportunities.

In my free time, I like to play the piano.
These days, I practice Waltz in minor of Chopin.
When it comes to my personality, I get along well with people. I enjoy spending time with my friends.

 

I like this inspiring quote by Ovid, a Roman poet: "Nothing is stronger than habit."

I live by this motto. I believe it's important to develop good habits.



 


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