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I'd like to modify what I said today.

I'm not sure what you said is "I want people to remember that I was able to serve my purpose".
And about a question "What is the purpose in your life?"
I think I'm getting to know about myself and looking for the reason why God made me.
I don't have any great idea like you, but every moment I try and pray to God to do what he is pleased.
I think my goal is to follow his will. In fact, it was also decided to go to Canada. What my life follows his will is the same comfort and joy that a flock of sheep follows the shepherd.

Perhaps we could feel similar but slightly different directions from the point of view.

Catholicism is similar to Christianity, but if there is anything else, I know that the Ten Commandments have no "don't worship idols" in Catholicism. This was done by Catholic priests with bad intentions. I know that Christianity came as a result of its struggle not to misinterpret God. How would you feel if you were a parent and your child worshiped a doll? As such, if God were our father, he would not like us to worship idols. My parents loved each other so much. They loved each other more than they loved God, so I wondered if God had taken them sooner with jealousy.

I'm not sure what do you mean by " I want people to remember that I was able to serve my purpose"

And your question about " What is the purpose in your life?"

I think I'm starting to  know myself better ,but I still have questions, like the reason why god created me?

I don't have any idas like you but I'm trying to think of ideas on how can I be more creative,I always pray that god will always guide me to do the things that pleases him.

I think my goal is to follow his will, and  my decision to go to Canada is one of his  will for me.  I feel happy with my decison because it's like a flock of sheep that follows the shepperd..

I think at some point we're the same but we have a different point of view.

 

 

Catholicism is similar to Christianity.but there are thing that we don't  have in common. It is written in the Ten Commandments that "Thou shalt have no other gods before me" and yet religious leaders like priest teach Catholics to worhip statues. Christianity teaches us to follow and serve good, not to praised and woshiped things that man made.

How would you feel as a parent if your child worshiped a doll? God doesn't want us to worship any other god  before him.

My parents loved each other more than they loved god, that's why I'm wondering .did god take them because he's jeoulous?

 

 

 


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