영작교정
목록
완료

I'd like to modify what I said today.

I'm not sure what you said is "I want people to remember that I was able to serve my purpose".
And about a question "What is the purpose in your life?"
I think I'm getting to know about myself and looking for the reason why God made me.
I don't have any great idea like you, but every moment I try and pray to God to do what he is pleased.
I think my goal is to follow his will. In fact, it was also decided to go to Canada. What my life follows his will is the same comfort and joy that a flock of sheep follows the shepherd.

Perhaps we could feel similar but slightly different directions from the point of view.

Catholicism is similar to Christianity, but if there is anything else, I know that the Ten Commandments have no "don't worship idols" in Catholicism. This was done by Catholic priests with bad intentions. I know that Christianity came as a result of its struggle not to misinterpret God. How would you feel if you were a parent and your child worshiped a doll? As such, if God were our father, he would not like us to worship idols. My parents loved each other so much. They loved each other more than they loved God, so I wondered if God had taken them sooner with jealousy.

I'm not sure what do you mean by " I want people to remember that I was able to serve my purpose"

And your question about " What is the purpose in your life?"

I think I'm starting to  know myself better ,but I still have questions, like the reason why god created me?

I don't have any idas like you but I'm trying to think of ideas on how can I be more creative,I always pray that god will always guide me to do the things that pleases him.

I think my goal is to follow his will, and  my decision to go to Canada is one of his  will for me.  I feel happy with my decison because it's like a flock of sheep that follows the shepperd..

I think at some point we're the same but we have a different point of view.

 

 

Catholicism is similar to Christianity.but there are thing that we don't  have in common. It is written in the Ten Commandments that "Thou shalt have no other gods before me" and yet religious leaders like priest teach Catholics to worhip statues. Christianity teaches us to follow and serve good, not to praised and woshiped things that man made.

How would you feel as a parent if your child worshiped a doll? God doesn't want us to worship any other god  before him.

My parents loved each other more than they loved god, that's why I'm wondering .did god take them because he's jeoulous?

 

 

 


수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 4회 40분 4주
교재
Freetalking without Book (교재 없이 프리토킹)
[시니어] 프리토킹
번호
제목
작성자
튜터
작성일
6676
완료
[49번째 영작 첨삭] 12/5
Min
Anna
2024.12.09
6675
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭] New piano academy teacher
YERIN
Heanna
2024.12.08
6674
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭] Sweet potato
YERIN
Heanna
2024.12.08
6673
완료
[38번째 영작 첨삭] Winter
JiHu
Gresha
2024.12.08
6672
완료
[194번째 영작 첨삭] Vegetable sandwich
Oliver
Frans
2024.12.08
6671
완료
[193번째 영작 첨삭] Maximum tier
Oliver
Frans
2024.12.08
6670
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭] My Second Moana Movie
John
Franz
2024.12.08
6669
완료
[192번째 영작 첨삭] RC car
Oliver
Frans
2024.12.07
6668
완료
[191번째 영작 첨삭] History exam
Oliver
Frans
2024.12.07
6667
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭] Ice cream have sweet taste!
ella
Marga
2024.12.07
6666
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭] Happy friday
Bella
Anna Fe
2024.12.06
6665
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭] Make an invitation
Bella
Anna Fe
2024.12.05
6664
완료
[15번째 영작 첨삭] 2
Daniel
Edleth
2024.12.04
6663
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭] Kids helping with chores
Daniel
Edleth
2024.12.04
6662
완료
[48번째 영작 첨삭] Diary
Yoon
Anna
2024.12.04
6661
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] chocolate is delicious!
ella
Marga
2024.12.03
6660
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] I went Fujikawaguchiko, FujiQ
REINA
Reneza
2024.12.03
6659
완료
[26번째 영작 첨삭] I went to haenam.
Jemin
South
2024.12.03
6658
완료
[159번째 영작 첨삭] Fashion
Rachel
Bel
2024.12.02
6657
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭] The last month of 2024
Bella
Anna Fe
2024.12.02

초대한 친구가 수업을 등록하면
무료 수업 1회를 드려요!

무료 수업 1회
초대한 친구가 회원 가입 및 수강권 결제 후 수업을 등록하면
두 사람 모두 무료 수업 1회 수강권을 받아요!
Step 01. 조이영어로 친구를 초대해 보세요!
https://joy05.co.kr
Step 02. 인증하기
초대한 친구가 수업 등록을 완료하면, 고객센터로 수업을 등록한 친구의 '아이디' 또는 '이름 + 휴대폰 번호 뒷자리'를 남겨주세요!
*자녀 혹은 학부모 이름으로 가입하신 경우, 실제 회원가입하신 수강생 이름으로 적어주세요!
Ex. 친구 아이디: joy5205 / 친구 이름: 김조이, 9876
Step 03. 혜택받기
고객센터를 통해 인증하신 내용이 확인되면, 혜택을 적용해드립니다!

Zoom 화상수업 가이드

1. Zoom 설치하기
아래 링크에 접속하여 Zoom 프로그램을 설치합니다.
2. 수강실 입장하기
1) 조이영어 홈페이지 로그인 후 강의실에서 [수강실 입장] 버튼을 클릭해주세요.
2) 버튼을 누르고 Zoom 프로그램 열기 허용 → 컴퓨터 오디오로 참가를 누르면 튜터와 연결됩니다.
3. Zoom 이용에 다른 문의사항이 있으신가요?
조이영어 학습매니저에게 연락주시면 수업에 관련된 문의사항을 친절히 상담해드리겠습니다.
  • 카카오톡 상담 채널 : @조이영어
  • 조이영어 고객센터 : 1899-8695 (운영시간 : 월~금 9:00~17:30)

이용약관

개인정보취급방침