2.Their album ranked No. 1 on the Billboard chart.
3.The most girls in our school are love them.
4.BTS have over 50 million fans there are many foreign fans, too.
5.BTS are also needed for the economic reasons of Korea.
6.I'm proud of BTS.
7.And their songs are good to listen to.
8.I wish them greater success.
1.The BTS is popular k-pop singers.
---BTS is a popular K-pop group.
2.Their album ranked No. 1 on the Billboard chart.
---Their album is ranked No. 1 on the Billboard charts.
3.The most girls in our school are love them.
---Most girls in our school love them.
4.BTS have over 50 million fans there are many foreign fans, too.
-- BTS has over 50 million fans, including a lot of foreign fans, too.
5.BTS are also needed for the economic reasons of Korea.
---The group's activities also contribute a lot to our country's economy.
6.I'm proud of BTS.
--Correct sentence.
7.And their songs are good to listen to.
---Their songs are good to listen to.
8.I wish them greater success.
--Correct sentence.
