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Last night, I got the news of my uncle's death. The message was written by my cousin, however I couldn't go there because if and when I go there, I have to go by air. If I were in Busan, I would certainly have attended. I would like to give my condolences to my uncle and his own family, but it's a shame that I have to ask my brother to deliver it to them instead of me. My uncle just had a mental illness. When he was young, he was artistic enough to paint a signboard in the theater. I don't know when his mental illness started, but I know his reckless anecdote. He rode a motorcycle on the highway from Daegu to Busan. It has been outlawed since it happened. Looking back now, he was a funny and brave man. His life was not practical, but he seems to have enjoyed it. That is why my aunt lived with him even though she was making a living.

[About my husband's character]
He is a generous and compassionate man.
When we first met, I was impressed, but I think I fell in love with him because of his dedication to the volunteer work prepared by the church. He is willing to help others actively. Even though he is not a doctor when he works in a hospital, he is a person who treats anyone with respect. He cares about the apartment security man or even the cleaning lady. I admire him for not treating people differently depending on their position.
Most importantly, My husband and I believe in God and pray everyday. God works in truly mysterious ways. It's in our best interest to believe in God.

Last  night I got a new about my uncle's death.The message was written by my cousin,however I couldn't go there because if and when I go there,I have to by plane.If I were in Busan , I would certainly attend. I would like to extend my condolences to my uncles family, I feel ashame that I have to ask my brother to tell them all this things instead of me. My uncle just had a mental illness. When he was young , he was very artistic ,he paints signboard in the theater. I don't know when his mental illness started , but I know his reckless anecdotes. He rode a motorcycle on  to highway from Daegu to Busan. It has been outlawed since it happened, looking back now , he was a brave and funny man. His life was not practical , but he seems to enjoyed his life, that's why my aunt stayed with him eventhough she's the one who works for the family.

 

[About my husband's character]
He is a generous and compassionate man.
When we first met, I was impressed, but I think I fell in love with him because of his dedication as a volunteer worker in our church. He is willing to help others actively. Even though he is not a doctor when he works in a hospital, he is a person who treats anyone with respect. He cares about the apartment, he sometimes work as  security guard  and he even clean the place. I admire him for not treating people differently base on their position.

 

 


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