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I joined a blind dating service yesterday, spent a time with a girl who met in the service. We’d a coffee time, talked about life and extras related to preferences of each. The atmosphere was good, she had a good appearance and attitude. But after a while, I misunderstood that she liked me as much as I had. I sent a message to have a next dating, but I didn’t get a reply. It means she has no interest on me. Yeah, each person has their own destiny, I told myself.

Today is the last day of this year 2019. There are many day-off to me. Working in this field needs high-level abilities. I have a big pride of myself with about ten years experiences. But don’t be arrogant. I am sure which is there are many good things at 2020. Be always cautious whenever I meet fortunes. During next ten years, I will focus on my works and family. I want to be a generous person who have a good sights and wisdom.

I joined a blind dating service yesterday, spent a time with a girl who met in the service. We’d a coffee time, talked about life and extras related to preferences of each. The atmosphere was good, she had a good appearance and attitude. But after a while, I misunderstood that she liked me as much as I had. I sent a message to have a next dating, but I didn’t get a reply. It means she has no interest on me. Yeah, each person has their own destiny, I told myself.

Today is the last day of this year 2019. There are many day-off to me. Working in this field needs high-level abilities. I have a big pride of myself with about ten years experiences. But don’t be arrogant. I am sure which is there are many good things at 2020. Be always cautious whenever I meet fortunes. During next ten years, I will focus on my works and family. I want to be a generous person who have a good sights and wisdom.

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I joined a blind dating service yesterday and spent a time with a woman whom I met in the service. We had coffee, talked about life and other things related to each other’s interests. The atmosphere was great; she has a good appearance and attitude, but I misunderstood that she liked me as much as I liked her. I sent a message to have a second date, but I didn’t get a reply. I assumed she has no interest on me. I told myself that each of us has our own destined person.

Today is the last day of 2019. There are many day-offs for me. Working in this field needs high-level of abilities. I am very proud of myself with about ten years’ experience. I’m not being arrogant. I am sure there will be many good things this 2020. I will remind myself to be always cautious whenever I meet fortunes. In the next ten years, I will focus on my works and family. I want to be generous people who have a good insights and wisdom.


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