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Buddhist people are believe in past life before birth. It call "karma". My mother have a strong belief on buddhism. I'm not a buddhist, but I have influenced many ways of my life styles from my mother. When I was kid, I had visited temple many times followed my mother. I remembered, whenever I visited temple, there was a old monk who gaved candies and fruit for me. As he said, "baby, you are so cute." So, when I remided at that time, it was a good memory until now. I believe very strongly which are past lifes can effect on present without any mistakes. So I try to do good and be cautious every times. In old korean saying, " What goes around comes around."

Buddhist people are believe in past life before birth. It call "karma". My mother have a strong belief on buddhism. I'm not a buddhist, but I have influenced many ways of my life styles from my mother. When I was kid, I had visited temple many times followed my mother. I remembered, whenever I visited temple, there was a old monk who gaved candies and fruit for me. As he said, "baby, you are so cute." So, when I remided at that time, it was a good memory until now. I believe very strongly which are past lifes can effect on present without any mistakes. So I try to do good and be cautious every times. In old korean saying, " What goes around comes around."

 

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Buddhist people believes in life before birth. It's called " The Law of Karma". My mother has a strong belief in Buddhism. I'm not a Buddhist but I have been influenced on many ways of my lifestyle by my mother. I remembered, whenever I visited the temple, there was an old monk who gave me candies and fruits. He always told me "Baby, you are so cute". So, when I'm reminded of that time I feel happy. It was a great memory. I strongly believe that mistakes from the past life can affect our present life. Therefore, I always try to do good and be cautious at all times. There is an old Korean saying " What comes around goes around"

 


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