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I knoww the united states of america is a democratic country.
it has a lot of influence on many countries over the world.
we thought america has spreading democrocy in many countries.
it has been regarded as a world cop.
how about now?
In my opinion, America is arrogant and greedy.
they insist on democracy when is is needed.

Look at what is happening in Hong Kong.
what is America doing for Hong kong.

America is not anything for that poor people.
I have lots of things to blame usa for.
I will wrap it up.

Anyhow America is not a cop for world.
they only work for themselves as far as I know.

I knoww the united states of america is a democratic country.

>> I know that the United States of America is a democratic country.


it has a lot of influence on many countries over the world.

>> It contains an outstanding influence on countries around the globe.


we thought america has spreading democrocy in many countries. it has been regarded as a world cop.

>> America has been spreading democracy in many countries so it has been regarded as a world cop.


how about now?

>> But, how about now?


In my opinion, America is arrogant and greedy.

>> no errors


they insist on democracy when is is needed.

>> They insist on democracy when it is needed.

Look at what is happening in Hong Kong.

>> Look at what is currently happening in Hong Kong. 


what is America doing for Hong kong.

>> America isn’t taking any further actions in doing what needs to be done for the sake of Hong kong.

America is not anything for that poor people.

>> America has nothing to offer to the poor.

I have lots of things to blame usa for.
I will wrap it up.

>> I have lots of things to blame the USA for, but for now I will wrap it up.

Anyhow America is not a cop for world.
they only work for themselves as far as I know.

>> Consequently, America is not a cop for the world because they only work for themselves.


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